Bread and Revolver

The bread the feeds us all

Is sacred for man kind

It gives us energy and power

To keep going

The revolver is use for the evil

It only hurts

It doesn't bring hapiness

The bread is the food for everyone

It never runs out

It is vital for man kind

The revolver is used only to kill

There is no good in the revolver

It hurts people

The bread brings hapiness to Families

The revolver brings sorrow to Families

The bread is the sacred food of god

The revolver is the sacred weapon of the Devil

Reviews

[Chaise Nicole]

"The revolver is use for the evil" is strange wording but it has potential to be a really strong line. I got the feeling that it was a Pro Gun Regulation themed poem which I really enjoy. Nicely done

[Lizardo]

Thank you !

[Laura Lynn]

This seems very clear. I like it.