Who I am

I feel like I'm the director

Of some terrible show

And all of my friends and family 

Are there

I Grabbed my stuff and i went to present 

The show

By the side was standing 

Me and by the other side

Me

They were myselfs, but both of them were what my family 

Wanted me to be and the other one was what my friends wanted me to be

As i finish the show they kicked me out 

They wanted what the people asked for

Both of them

They threw me out 

I got tired of it

I wanted to be what I wanted to be

When their show finish,

They went walking the

Same way were I was

I Grabbed my gun

Loaded with for shots

I shot at both of myself

With a victorius smile I got out of the building

Went were the show was being filmed

And did things my Way

What i thought was correct

Reviews

[Jamie]

Great piece of work! good job.

[Lizardo]

Thank you sou much

[Brian M. Peeples]

Normally, if I'm in an energetic mood, I'll write a paragraph, or try to help with certain things like feedback, spelling and grammar, etc, but I'm quite tired. Here's a note to you, that when I get a chance, if not already done by the time I get around to it, I will definitely help edit/revise this piece of poetry like I had done previously to another one of your poems.

[Lizardo]

Alright I'll be waiting, thank you a lot

[Brian M. Peeples]

No problem. It'd probably be tomorrow after getting some sleep, or if I drink some more coffee. :P

[Laura Lynn]

(that is awesome)...I try to be quiet not saying very much thinking that is more feminine, womanly or attractive, and for fear of the saying the wrong thing, but since I do not need to worry about all that so much I am going to write a poem called who I am right now to seize the minute although I should have been working on a more complex grandiose project, but I can't seem to do it right now, so I drank a coffee so, I can't sleep as I wanted to either even though I can't seem to write anything really important you know, maybe you can read it when I'm through speed writing, but there's so much to read, I should be picking up one of the many books on the shelf today, I promise myself to spend ten minutes doing that,

[Lizardo]

Alright i will read it, and thank you a lot