Life

On morning we wake up

With the clouds up high

And the sky With his beautiful color skyblue

Taking a step by a time and time

You wake up and eat

The tide that I'm walking

Wades and Tides

And the devil as he's talking

With a masquerade on his face

At noon we work 

To make our families 

Believe

In hope

We eat to gain force

And keep marching on

Our life is like a lightning

The appears and dissapears

Instead of complaining

We probably should be grateful about it

At the afternoon we go back home

Home oh beautiful home

Only you can understand my pain

And my family walking me through

The bad and good

At night we go to sleep

Oh how great is to rest

And be thankful for the day we had

Even though it wasn't a great day

We still should be thankful

Because we're alive

Happiness is like a lions den

If you make a false move

You are thrown into the endless darkness of sorrow

It takes an hour to try to find our good friend sleep

An hour we take to think about our life and our day

Even if we're in bad moment of our life

I know good things are coming our way

If Chaos somehow wins in our fight

There is no need to worry

Order always will come

And we can finally rest

From the life we had

It's time to think about what life gives us

You may say that it only throws bad things

But it all depends on what way you take

What life gives you

Reviews

[Cool Girl]

Very inspiring. Good job, you are very talented!

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much I really appreciete your time

[Cool Girl]

Oh no, my time appreciates your work:)

[Laura3841]

Very, very nice. I like writing that makes me think. Yours not only makes you think but makes you stop and appreciate life as well.

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much!

[Jimmy Yetts]

It does, indeed. Some good phrases turned, here, Lizardo; especially like: "...we work to make our families believe in hope."
Keep writing, young poet!

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much, I really appreciete it

[sweetvalorie]

So true, it's all about what we take away from life, or perspective. Like the saying, if life gives you lemons you make lemonade. Good work.

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much

[ANTO]

"Happiness is like a lions den
If you make a false move
You are thrown into the endless darkness of sorrow" - great writing Lizardo - I never heard happiness described in such barbed terms in such a precarious way before.

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much ANTO, I really appreciete it

[jacob erin-cilberto]

family certainly does walk us through the bad and the good....when all others fail to stand by us...blood is thicker than water...
good philosophy here, what we take life is how and what we become what we do.

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much