What If

What if I took the wrong decision

And I would be dead by now

What if stop talking to me

I would feel really sad

What if I try something new

You never know until you try it

What if I got what I wanted

But not what I needed

What if I had every possibility in the world

And I wasted it

I'll take a deep breath and try to put it Aside

What if You were with me

But I would be someone else

What if really everything is made for a reason

Then I should stop complaining

What if I made a mistake

Witch for that I could be made Fun of

What if My heart was like a glass

So delicate it could break

I don't wan't to pass through that again

I'll take a deep breath and try to put is Aside...

Reviews

[UQ]

I got an idea from this poem that instead of complaining and regrets we should act with what we have.
Excellent write.

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much!

[Sam A. Garner]

Really like this, "What if?" has got to be the most depressing question someone can ask themselves and you capture that sense of regret perfectly here. I also got a sense of loss and potential from this that I really enjoyed. Great work!

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much, I really appreciete it !

[Laura Lynn]

there is a lot of really interesting ideas in here, we can't just tell ourselves all the time "everything happens for a reason" because that is not the complete story, is what I gather you are saying, we complain because there is something that needs to happen, that is our motivation, I hear the last part as an exhortation, " I'll take a deep breath and put it aside" we should do that, when we have an alternate task to complete,

[Lizardo]

You are right, Everything happens for a reason but it's no the complete story because after we realize our mistake or bad decission we will try to put our ship on track again.