Colors

In the quest for happiness

We are blind and colorless

'Cause we can't see how life

Tries everyday to cheer us up

Our vision is in black and white

We can't see the colors of life

The colors that cheer us up

But let me tell you 

That we are blind too

'Cause we pay more atention

To the Criticism thats agains you

Then to the colors of Life

What is the point of life

If you can't see it's colors?

Reviews

[Confuser]

I loved this poem and Oh my goodness 15, are you kidding. This is so brilliant; you are so wise beyond your years. This poem says so much of humanity, the way people are in their little bubbles and choose not to look at one and all in their circumstances. It is quite profound and you are a great writer. Please keep writing. Thank you.

[Lizardo]

Thank so much! I really appreciete it! I mean yeah everyone is paying atention to bad things but not for the colors of life that really matter

[Confuser]

I hope one day when you are much older you look back and see with experience how great this poem really is!

[Lizardo]

I will do it, I want to be an aerospace engeener but for my hobby I want to be a great write, I'll see how time has improved my writing jaja!

[Confuser]

Take your time....but don't waste it. You have many gifts I am certain.

[Sami Khalil]

Inspirational write with so much colorful facts to appreciate...:).......

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much Sami, You are really apprecieted

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:).......

[Jimmy Yetts]

Cheery little ditty.
Appreciate the message and the brevity, Lizardo.
Even more improvement, young poet!

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much Frankie!

[Matching Socks]

A great message Lizardo, if we open our minds we'll see things in a different light.

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much Ana, and happy 2015!

[DoormanDan]

I like how you incorporated colors into this poem to get the message across, it makes this poem feel unique. I think this is now one of my favorites of yours!

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much Dan, I really appreciete it Friend :)

[DoormanDan]

Anytime(unless its at 1:30am lol)

[Lizardo]

hahaha I feel that bro, you couldn't of say it much better lol

[jacob erin-cilberto]

when we see things only in black and white, we miss so much of what life has to offer...

outside the box is where the really good action is...but those who think in narrow strips of fate, never find that action.

nicely expressed.

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much Jacob