Velociraptor

They do not care about what you say

Their only goal is to destroy you

Everyone is trying to be free 

but the velociraptor is ready to strike

Running from him

you trip over

you hear the moaning sounds of it

coming closer

the scene changed

Now I'm in a place where I can't see a thing

The velociraptor is coming closer

His claws againts the wall

Everyone is trying to be happy

But the velociraptor will strike you

No matter what 

Wait for it 

But its clear to say about

That when he strikes

You need to get up again

The velociraptor wil strike you

No matter what you do

They'll try to bring you down

But show them 

That you are bigger then them

Reviews

[Crapim]

Very beautifully described poem. I can see the fierce nature of society itself by your metaphor with the velociraptors.

[Lizardo]

Thats exactly how I mean it to be, thank you very much