Why Do I....?

With the emotions floating around me

Like flies around me

And I think I'm going to have a heart attack

Madness reaching to my head

I'll feel lonely and sad

Why Do I feel like this?

I know that was not your fault on any ground

Since I'm the only one

Who can control my emotions

I'll try to be alright

Now I taste sorrow on my toungue

And I breath Sadness through my nose

What is wrong with me...

I know you didn't do anything to hurt me

Since I'm the only who can control my emotions...

I'll try to be fine..

Why Do I keep housing on this suffering?

What a waste of time this is

The party is over and everyone left

The next day will be better when I wake up again

I know you didn't do anything to hurt me

Since I'm the only one who can control my emotions..

So I'll stop feeling so dam bad about life

And I'll go to fulfill my dreams through endless trials

That life is

Sometimes I think that is bad joke

But I'll be alright

Reviews

[Daisy]

life becomes a joke when we do what we don't want to
It's beautiful

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much!

[Cool Girl]

I love the ending! It made me happy:) Wonderful job at really capturing all the bad times, but closing the poem with a nice brave ending. Nicely penned:)

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much!

[Cool Girl]

You are very welcome!

[sonnie ibadah]

"...Now I taste sorrow on my toungue
And I breath Sadness through my nose
What is wrong with me.." i'm a fan of something sponteneous and raw emotions. i like this

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much!, I really appreciete it!

[Heartful5160]

Wonderful job! There are times when we feel like we're the only ones going through tough times. But no one is alone. There are always people going through tough times and wondering why bad things happen to them, but it's life. Life is filled with tough times and there's always a bright side on the other end of the tunnel. All you have to do is find the resolution for your problem. But great write! Keep it up!

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much! I really appreciete it!

[Heartful5160]

Your welcome! I love reading your work. Very true and entertaining.

[Confuser]

You are a great writer; pulling out all those feeling, sorry, but especially at your age is phenomenal. This could be from someone of any age. You are a wonderful writer, I loved the poem, and everything will aways be alright. No? My son 14, wow, I'm blown away by you talent. Thank you Lizardo. Bravo and keep writing.

[Lizardo]

I'm really thankful for this kind review, I really am and now when I look back when I thought that my writing wasn't worth anything, really thank you a lot!

[Confuser]

That is RIDICULOUS!!!

[AprilRN1210]

This is a lot like a poem I recently wrote asking some of the same type of questions of myself and my thought-processes with emotions.. while others do not have control over our emotions, they do have influence.. I like the resilience and the strength exhibited in this piece. It has a nice balance of vulnerability and fight..

one thing I noticed..

"And I breath"... did you mean "breathe?"

[Lizardo]

Oh god, Thank you I didn't see that, and thank you for reading this too

[AprilRN1210]

you are more than welcome.. glad I could help:)