Reflections

Reflections show above the sea

Showing every phace of me

Every wrong and every right

The reflections stand upon all

Wait, for the difference to come

It takes time, but it will come

The light always comes

And life is a hard game

Reflection show around my house

My mirros telling me not to lie

The mirros bouncing light

To endless games

Reflections waiting for me

At the sea

I can't walk a single step

My reflections wont stop showing

And I can't lie to myself

'Cause I know the truth...

Reflection show above the sea

Showing me the different types of faces

That I have

The mirros boucing light

To play game with it

While they are on that

I can't lie to myself

Author's Note

I really think that this one is one of the worst I have written

Reviews

[NeiL ArandA]

Someone said that our eyes are the mirrors of our soul. And our lips or speech are the reflection of our inner heart. A heart is always coined as representation of a person's character and virtues and principles. A person who discerns the truth and is aware that lying bothers him is someone or somebody that had a change heart. Something happened there and transpired there by which it cant and would no longer accepts and tolerates his set of values and principles. The way we think and act and speak and live is a reflection of our real values and beliefs and standard of how life should be lived. What an awesome introspection on this penned piece.

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much Neil, I really appreciete it

[ANTO]

Mirrors tend to show us as we are and this exploration of that theme shows us the honesty of the author, I feel.
Its a well thought out write Lizardo but not the strongest of yours I agree with you.We all have off days.
:)

[Lizardo]

Thank you ANTO, I really appreciete it :)

[Cool Girl]

I like it! It's not super bad:) I'll show you the worst thing I've written down. It's a song I made up in second grade....

Oh when I walk down the street
Oh oh oh oh
I like to walk
How I like to walk
I can walk like a movie star
Or a penguin
So come along with me
Oh when I walk down the street
Walk down the street
Walk down the street


Happy now?
That was super bad!
Yours was really good and I really like the ending:)

[Lizardo]

Hahaha is not that bad :) Thank you a lot! (seriously it is not bad)

[Cool Girl]

Thanks:) and you are so very welcome!

[CA Anurag Sharma]

I wonder why you think that this is one of the worst you have written.... its certainly not bad at all.... reflections reflect the way one thinks of him/her...."Reflections show above the sea...showing me the different types of faces I have" ,,,beautiful line....

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much, I'm glad you like it. Because I thought that this wasn't one strong poem

[jacob erin-cilberto]

if we can look at ourselves in the mirror...and know we have been honest with ourselves and others...that glass will always be clear.

[Lizardo]

That is very true, It will always be clear, Thank you Jacob for your review