A Star

A shiny light the sparks the mind in the human heart

Shiny light

That you shine at night

Little star

Far away you are

Watching over us

Like a guardian angel

Bright star

That you appear at night

With your burning light

Sparking a fire in the human heart

Little star

That you appear late at night

What a joy it is

When you come to visit me again with your light

I wait for you the whole day

Just to see your sparkling light

In my night sky

I'm still waiting for you

My shiny star

Please come back again 

every night

I will never forget you

My shiny light

Author's Note

This is very different from what I usually do, I can feel the difference from the distance lol
But thought to give a try to something new

Reviews

[SLY Girl]

I like it, its like another version of Twinkle, Twinkle little star - its charming, relatable, and memorable. Keep writing! It doesn't hurt to try to broaden our style - this is how we come better poets, and people as a whole.

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much SLY Girl, I really appreciete it

[SLY Girl]

You're welcome, I enjoy your poems! :)

[Cool Girl]

This is indeed different! I love it though:)

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much :)

[Cool Girl]

Welcome! :)

[Poet]

I can remember when I was young, my bed was next to the window. When I couldn't sleep I would look out and see the same star in the same place. This poem brought back some memories. Good one Lizardo.

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much Tim, I really apprecite it.
You know, I usually do that, with the difference that I go to my backyard and watch the constellations

[Laura Lynn]

It's not so easy having a little star,

[Lizardo]

Very true, very true..

[ANTO]

A lovely dedication to one who has changed your life for the better Lizardo - may they always be in your life my friend.
:))

[Lizardo]

Thank you ANTO, I had my doubts on this one