I Drive Fast In My Car

This is very random

Time to get out of here

I'll drive fast in my car

And never look back

Far away

From the endless streets

I don't drive the car

I make the car drive itself

In the Underground road

Where dreams come true

I'll go fast in my car

And drive far away

Before night sets

At the end of my sleep

There's a race to the sky

Who is going to get there first?

The winner will win the eternal sleep

While the looser will get the endless dream

I go fast in my car

And never look back

Drive far away from the street

And raise my hand up to the sky

I'll drive fast in my car

Before night sets

At the end of my sleep

Author's Note

Tried something new ( I think it didn't worked but I wanted to see what you guys think)

Reviews

[DoormanDan]

You tried something new, and I can tell you with absolute certainty that it paid off TREMENDOUSLY. I don't think there is a single person on this planet that can't relate to this poem at some point in their lives. We all want to drive fast in our cars at some point. Honestly, this is quite a creative piece you've written! :)

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much Dan! and it's true, at some point we all want some situations in life to go fast

[Andrew Dane Parker]

Oh it worked, very well actually. Good job. Would make a nice song.

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much, I Really appreciete it

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Ow I liked this one .Something new I read in a while . Very beautiful thought and the title caught my attention first haha . Well done ! : )

[Lizardo]

Haha Thank you so much! I really appreciete it :)