Before and After

Something, not special at all

Before I existed

I was alone in the dark

Every inch of darkness covering my head

I was floating alone, in an endless dream

After I existed

I was alone in the light

A light guiding my way through the dark

I was alone, in a long adventure of mine.

Reviews

[Afraa]

If you take the time to think about it, it seems like we humans are always alone. We are born as individuals, aren't we?

I love the message this sends out. Although it is a very simple piece, you succeeded in giving it an epic wrap up. These are truly the best kinds of poems.

Outstanding job, Lizardo!

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much Afraa! I'm glad you liked it :)

[Afraa]

You're very welcome!

[Daisy]

wow very very nice words you have chosen....... great job

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much Daisy!

[Cool Girl]

Very interesting.. I absolutely loved this!
Sometimes I wonder if this is Heaven. If we all are dead and just don't know it. Sometimes I wonder if I have been many different things, just living multiple lives.. I wonder if it's all a dream or if Im just in a coma and won't wake up. I wonder what will become of you, me, all of us here together. Sometimes I wish I could just break free and do what I want. I have so many friends in so many places and I could go find them again because I know where they are. I just can't leave this place.. Too young, too dumb.. Life is so complicated.

[Lizardo]

Amen, Life is too complicated, but I guess that's the fun of it

[Cool Girl]

Very very true xD