A car

Something random

The sun is going down

He stands in a highway.

Watching how the car dissapears in the distance, as the sun goes down. 

Remembering the great times he had with his brother. 

Since they were young up to now. 

"You stood always stood by my side" he said. 

"Whatever road you take, wherever you are, you are my brother" 

He sat down in the road. 

Now the car dissapear in the distance. Stars appear in the sky. 

"It was a long day" 

He turned the opposite side now, and he started walking.

"I'll tell you about it when I see you again" 

Author's Note

This is random

Reviews

[closed]

this was a cool image

also sad in that the character is both remembering the good times spent with his brother
as well as watching him leave

really good short short


-Dream

[Perkele.7885]

Now this is kinda of an an open ended like a rotary in Boston or Providence They might see each other soon or it might taken them a good long time

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much Perkele! I really appreciete this awesome review :)

[Ilerah]

I like it, its descriptive, and gives a short story. If you took this, you could make a larger poem, or even a story off of it. Its also well written, very good

[Lizardo]

Thank you a lot

[Cool Girl]

Random, but good! I like it!

[Lizardo]

Thanks CG!