Hurricane Of Thoughts

Its been quite a long time, how did you like this one?

Waking up better

Fire in the ether 

Talking up better

Until it feels better

Waking up rested

Dreaming Of the better

Consumption on its way

Making it hard to throw it all away

To live in this Hurricane of thoughts

Creating something better

Until it looks seller 

Waking up stellar

Talking what you feel

Until it leaves you real 

Making our way

In this hurricane is thought

Is not the same as the weight on your back or in your lap

Feeling like the end is near

Trying to build so it makes you clear 

Clear to the rest of the world 

Love until it ends 

Heaven on the earth 

Family and Friends 

Waking up better

Until you feel better 

Life is not same 

In this Hurricane of Thoughts 

Life is not dream

In this world of mine

Reviews

[J3ssInJupit3r]

Dude, I don't know if you sing or rap but this poem definitely needs some music put to it. I was humming to it when I read it. I freaking love this. It flows. It goes. It shows your inner emotions. I freaking love this and I thank you so much for sharing!

[dan]

zardo, see I knew I'd find another great one you've written. Not lately I used to review you all the time. You have a lot of talent, give yourself some credit. Nice write! take care...dan

[Lizardo]

I consider myself to not have talent, but I do consider the fact the I can improve my writing better, so maybe its time to give some credit... well, there is no time to rest, just to keep improving :)
Thanks dan, I really appreciate it :)

[dan]

You're welcome. Good luck to you! take care...dan