Short Story of an Anxious and Depressive Person

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I watched behind a wall made of glass.

Scenes of my life. 

The temperature here is cold. It's dark. It's lonely. 

I want to intervene and help, I do not want to feel useless.

I want to prove myself and everyone around me that I can do more.

But yet I stand here, looking through the wall of glass in my head.

Of what my life could of have been, if I wasn’t stopped by this wall of glass. 

So easy to break physically, but yet so hard to break mentally. 

Reviews

[Willard Wells]

Spot on and I am glad you write about it. I find from within my surreal world I deal better if I write about my conditions and thoughts. Nice work. Once you have some years under your belt of handling your world it will be more of a tool, an advantage over others. Don't rush, you have much time and experiences to help guide you on your journey. Peace Out.

[Coyote Poetry]

Many folks walk the line.
"So easy to break physically, but yet so hard to break mentally."
Depression can make us tire and not move forward. But we must. Thank you for sharing the excellent thoughts and words.
Coyote

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Valentine]

Deep thoughts that we all feel at one time or another in our lives. Valentine

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much Valentine for this review

[Douglas Levi Gribbins]

Phenomal, Would you mind if i quoted you in one of my future stories?

[Lizardo]

Not at all, I feel honored! Thank you for this amazing Review :)

[ms. barrie]

amazing poem...compelling imagery depicting this at oft' time
Debilitating mental illness...Thank you for sharing (:

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much for reviewing! It really means a lot :)

[Emily]

Great poem!
Keep on writing!

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much!

[Daisy]

wonderful lizardo.... i do admit that wall of glass is so easy to break physically yet so hard mentally awesome beyond words.... loved it

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much Daisy, I really appreciate it :)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Sounds familiar. the w"all" keeps us from moving forward. it makes life become a bloody misery. nicely written
100 points my friend

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much Danny, I really appreciate it

[Dani The Unreviewed]

no
problem :-)

[RomaJ]

depression can be debilitating as it overwhelmes a person. Feeling trapped inside that glass. The barrier conjured up by are own minds, can be suffocating; often triggering panic attacks. Whew. I find meditation can be helpful and breathing excercises. But what ever the root cause, once you begin climbing over that mountain that's in your way. You'll be stronger. Sometimes life is filled with so many challenges. It's like that song, "a bear climbed over a mountain...and what did he see...another fccking mountain!!" d****t Lol. Love this Lizardo. It resonates with me and I'm sure with many.

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much Roma! Your review really means a lot, thanks :) and true, but we need to fight it so it doesn't overcome us and I've let the guard down but I'm beginning to be happy again.
Thank you a lot :)

[RomaJ]

That's good to hear, Lizardo. Stay strong and I will too.