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Dunno, restoring it right now Was lost when Writers Cafe servers went down years ago. There is no finding it at this point.

Reviews

[Victim of cyber bully a..]

Dunno you take really time .

[Steven Williams]

what's better than writing to let it out? I find myself so stressed if I skip one day of writing!

[siri]

this makes me think to hard it was a good write though but now since i am stuck inside my head thinking im gonna go...hmmm...some how sit on a big rock coming out of the middle of a river...well it was a pleasure reading your work and i will continue ur stuff after my river sit thingy

[Captain Blackheart (The..]

A great rant and a good way to get it out in the open...well done!

[Jared Kardos]

Pretty good, m'dear. One thing I have to say, though--it's not a critique, just noticed a typo. In the third stanza, third line, I think you meant "quiet drink" instead of "quite drink." Just FYI.

Other then that minor detail, great poem. Hopefully it got that steam out of ya.

[Crazy Cat Man]

a great piece. I have no critique. :D perfect