In My Veins

A poem I found in an archive in my private myspace group. I thought it was pretty neat, so I decided to add it.

To Love is Amazing
As a Matter of Fact it's Dazing
Love is the High When You're Low
And in the Dark, the Light that Glows

To Love is to Feel the Sun
And to know Unending Fun
Love is Warmth on a Cold Winters Day
It's the Rain in the Middle of May

To Love is to Feel it All
Like Hopping through Leaves in Fall
Love is a Gift
Something to give You a Lift

To Love is to Dance
To be Caught in an Unexplainable Trance
Love is Pain
But Without there is no Gain

To Love is to Trust
Its My Addiction, My Must
Love is My World
It has Me Mixed, It has Me Swirled

To Love is to have Knowledge of the Past
Something that Lasts and Lasts
Love is the Drug,
No the Lightening in My Veins

Reviews

[Liverpoolfan]

Very good. Wonderful, in fact. Loads and loads of people like to write about love... but they're poems don't always seem to have half the substence yours does. The way the stanza's flow, and the way it's... written. It's great. The use of (well, the lack of) punctuation is interesting. It somehow makes the reader more focused, because of the way it's been written they may not necessary be able to understand it.

[Prince of Poetry]

wow amazing how you described this love...I wish I could meet it great write mama

[Baby Boy]

Yes ma'am! Love is everything you have described here! This is a very beautiful write and the rhyming is perfect and I like how the ending justifies the title! Great job sweetie! Keep up the good work gurl! One luv Miss Liz! :)


-JC-

[Dave Lounsbury]

nice work, flows smoothly.