I Hope

I Hope

A Poem by LizLadyNinja
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A restored poem from the old WC. Enjoy!

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I hope you realize the failure you’ve set yourself up for.

I hope that everywhere you go you see me.

I hope every laugh you hear is mine.

I hope that you realize that for you, there is nothing more.

 

I hope you know that I gave you my all.

I hope you know that you stabbed me first.

I hope you know I wouldn’t set you up to fail.

I hope you know that with you I refused to fall.

 

I hope you know that you’ll never beat me.

I hope you know that I’ll always be the better one.

I hope you know that I once loved you like a sister.

I hope one day, the better friend I was, you’ll see.

 

I hope it hurts to wake up in the morning.

I hope you have a feeling of emptiness without me at your side.

I hope you feel the pain I did.

I hope on your finger you get that stupid ring.

 

I hope it sucks to know I’ll never be there.

I hope you made the right choice.

I hope you never lack friends.

I hope all the guys stop and stare.

 

I hope that I go far, farther, and farther still!

I hope that you do too, but

I hope karma comes full swing first.

I hope from life’s bounty you get your fill.

 

I hope you are the trophy wife.

I hope one day you see what a scum bag he really is.

I hope that one day you feel the sting of loneliness.

I hope you get what you want out of life.

 

I hope at our reunion I look in your eyes and see envy there.

I hope I get everything you ever wanted.

I hope you see me and feel jealous.

I hope you know that anymore I just don’t care

 

I hope one day you beg me for forgiveness.

I hope one day you weep at my feet.

I hope that one day you lose your way.

I hope one day that I can grant you forgiveness.

 

© 2008 LizLadyNinja


Author's Note

LizLadyNinja
I knowit needs work. Its in the pile.

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Wow....nice poem girlie. The words flowed very well, there was a nice rhythm, and I could feel the words come out at me. You can really feel the strong emotions in this piece. Nice job!! XOXOXOX Brit

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I loved the simple structure of your lines. Really made it enjoy more enjoyable to read. The flow was perfect and I could feel the words kind of float of the page at me.

Wonderful job!!!

Posted 18 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on April 10, 2008

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LizLadyNinja
LizLadyNinja

Denver, CO



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I joined Writerscafe almost 10 years ago, when it was in its infancy. I dealt with the breakdown when it lost our writing and many of my pieces were unrecoverable. Which, as you can imagine was pretty.. more..