In Chains

Chain me up, strike me down

bind my hands, make me bow.

put me where you want me, suspend me in mid air

keep me on a tight leash, I'm not fair

make me scream your name, make me beg you to stop,

this pain is so intense, there's sharks in this box

you have something I want, and I know what it is

you can whip me all you want, but I'll still come after it.

Reviews

[Elizabeth Marie O'neil-..]

I am a bit confused on the subject of this poem. Is this a BDSM thing, or are you undergoing some torture for information? No offense. I just read it in two different forms and I think I'd be able to appreciate your work better if that was clarified.
Whatever the subject matter, I like the way you wrote it.
Nice job!

[zainul]

It appears weird that you want to come even you are whipped all over.
Expressed eloquently what you intended.
But,I need to know what is the attraction of being chained up.