roses are red

Roses are Red

Violets are blue

i love Jesus and he

loves me to he theres for me

when im alone he puts my soul on fire with the holy ghost

Reviews

[Laura E. Aranda]

Bravo!
Loved the message behind this poem! Keep on writing, girl!
Just to fix a few things though, (if you want):
Your lines:

loves me to he theres for me

when im alone he puts my soul on fire with the holy ghost

Here is the correct spelling: 'too' with two 'o's in it...
Capitalize your first letters of the words on each line and that will make it just right....
Take care!