when i saw you

when i saw you, you blew me away

i did not know what to say

your eyes were bright blue

it told me what i had to do 

are you the one that is for me

i hope so  cause you have

a beautiful gleem

Reviews

[Laura E. Aranda]

This was really pretty. I enjoyed reading this one.
The last word you used was 'gleem' That word was misspelled...add an 'a' and make it 'gleam'
Other than that...it was nice! Cheers!