Very thoughtful and deep…. Makes me shiver…” deep inside your soul lies a vulture”….. a raw and cutting line…. Perhaps the truth….” All eyes upon you”….
This is damning and powerful….and well written
Warmly
B
Very thoughtful and deep…. Makes me shiver…” deep inside your soul lies a vulture”….. a raw and cutting line…. Perhaps the truth….” All eyes upon you”….
This is damning and powerful….and well written
Warmly
B
This one cuts deep in a quiet way.
The imagery is stark, but it feels honest.
You write the darker parts of the self with a kind of clarity that lingers.
Not sure what to add here. I have been writing poems since I was 16. Saved much of it, lost some of it. I'm 51 now. Lately I have felt a need to get my voice out there. I guess like a lot of .. more..