With her

Possible song lyrics and my first writing piece

I look at you
Try to describe what I see
It's to simple to say your beautiful
And far too good to be
Your just out of reach
But your a diamond in a sea
Of unanswered questions
Like do you even notice me
I guess I will just have to see

I see perfection
Staring back at me
Just a section
Of my collection of dreams
And naturally
I come to the conclusion
That your not staring back at me
It's just the illusion
Trying to deceive me

Author's Note

Thinking of turning this into a song so it's more of a first draft

Reviews

[Broken Reality]

Wow that's interesting. Who was it about?

[Dark Princess]

It seems like you might have to work on flow a little, but besides that they are beautiful lyrics. :)

[Darkening Shadow]

Nice it should like some sweet lyrics too.

[Darkening Shadow]

Nice it should like some sweet lyrics too.

[Tasha]

You should turn this into a song. Your words were so special. This is a very lucky girl. Great write! Keep it up, and welcome to Writers Cafe. I hope you post more work I can't wait to read it.
~Tasha