Disappear

Collaboration with Jonathan Bodnar He wrote the first half I worte the second

My wings feel cold as they are pressed against a cold dark wall
My eyelids heavy as they strain to open
I feel cold chains all around me
Embracing me, pulling me into the wall
Opening my eyes I see you
Lying there with your wings spread across the cold damp floor
Blood rolling down your cheek
I see your eyes, closed and lifeless

"Forgive me, my dear, I have failed my purpose
As it lays there in front of me
I cannot live with myself after this
Forgive me as I didnt know the consequences
I didn't know it would be my fualt
I caused your blood to spill with sorrow
I will give my wings to you
Just look at me one more time with that familair air
Say you miss me
Say you love me"

Author's Note

first half is basically a train of thought while the second half is theoretically said out loud.

Reviews

[Helena]

A very good collaboration indeed. Intiguing "dark" write.
Bravo! Thank you for submitting this to my contest. ~ Helena

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

Very interesting in the way you two wrote this..i enjoyed this poem it is loving and so so sad.
good writing you two..

Chloe
xoxo