Bitter

A poem about a loser that unfortunately I dated.

Leave me alone

I can't take the pain

I'm through with your lies

I'm done with this game.

 

Don't tell me sorry

Because I know it’s not true

Its finally time

I say goodbye to you.

 

And those words you said stung

But I swallowed them down

I kept holding on

With a permanent frown.

Please don't say that you love me

Because I want to believe

That I could trust you

But you always deceive.

 

It hurts for me to say this

But it's coming from the heart

I hope that you will hurt too

Because, jerk, you tore my world apart.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

doesn't have the best flow, but its sincere and I'm obviously a little bitter

Reviews

[Brandon Dunbar]

Nicely done. I thought it flowed well enough.

[Fear Corrupts!]

I actually like this, good rhythm...

Molly, *