forever my dear

A poem for my love.

I am going to keep you my love

Till the pyramids dissipate

In the sands of time

My words will promise forever

until the sun ceases upon implosion 

And all the aftermath is darkness

The Gods at Delphi will laugh incessantly

As they would not believe 

our togetherness dictates

A remarkable continuum that

Tomorrow is a better yesterday

Flying away on a monarch butterfly

Reviews

[Eagle Cruagh]

See, I told you !
I just read all the reviews and they think
you are the best too.
This poem about love is exciting. For a while I thought
it was the best thing I ever read, then I read it again
and changed my mind ---- it was better than that.
Write me something like that and I`ll just float away on
my cloud.
------ Eagle Cruagh

[Not Your Typical New Yo..]

Love should be timeless, and your poem reflects that. I really like how you use the power of love being use when age have overcome the world. Sweet!

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Fantastic and romantic, all a big surprise. I have to wonder if this wave is too big to ride.

[Phantom Heart]

Thanks fro stopping by and reading! It is a pretty larger than life wave... :)

[Luke L]

Great stuff very romantic sentiment. Also thanks for all the reviews on my stuff!

[Phantom Heart]

Thanks for stopping by! and you are also welcome!

[WILDERNESS]

Sensual and somber, lovely poem on epic love. Great read.

[Phantom Heart]

Thank you!

[Traci]

A beautiful poem of love, displaying lovely imagery. I look forward to reading more of your work.

[Phantom Heart]

Thank you!

[Aethereal]

This is a beautiful love poem that says so much through the use of historical and natural metaphors. Such a love would please the Pantheon on MT. Olympus. I'll be riding butterflies in my dreams tonight.

[Phantom Heart]

Thank you!

[Nix]

Great imagery! Very descriptive and specific. I do believe a little more rhythm could make this one of the best love poems I've heard!

[Baby Ricochet]

Wow! That is a long time to keep a love.

[Phantom Heart]

Well...At least until I die. :) Thanks for reading.

[Just Kim]

Such a lovely and deep write, like this alot

[Phantom Heart]

I appreciate the review. Thanks.