Incomplete Heartache

Dreaming the dream.

In my dream

He's a picturesque phantom

His heavenly scent

Cedar and sage

 

In my dream

We reoccur in an antiquated fairytale

His voice softly handsome

An echo in my heart

 

In my dream

His kiss is sweet as midnight

His comments are

Muffled yearnings

 

In my dream

Our fears become an awakening fragility

Sadly our love won't last

Each morning is time-past

 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I liked the poem. Sweet dreams must end.
"In my dream
Our fears become an awakening fragility
Sadly our love won't last
Each morning is time-past"
Above lines true and real. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Phantom Heart]

Thank you for reading and reviewing. :) I appreciate it.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[just another mac withou..]

so beautifully sad and yet a very strong write. sigh....the longing for something lasting and real is felt by me

[Phantom Heart]

Thank you for reading and taking the time to review. It is much appreciated. :)

[just another mac without her]

you are welcome, it was a pleasure to read you

[Maryam Mottahedeh]

I Love your writing Morgan... it's had depth and breath... it's sophisticated

It sounds to me as though it's a recurring or a sequence of dreams of you and him... yes or am I just projecting?

[Phantom Heart]

Thank you for reading and no, you're correct and not projecting. :)

[WILDERNESS]

May your dreams come true......... nice flowing poem and sensitive.

[Phantom Heart]

Thank you very much! I appreciate your review.

[WILDERNESS]

Always welcome dear......

[Flutterby aish]

Its a beautiful piece. Would have loved a little more though because your piece is such that one does crave for an even more detailed picture. But otherwise it's an amazing write up. Thank you for sharing.

[Phantom Heart]

Thank you so much! I actually thought it was a bit short myself. :)

[Flutterby aish]

:D Welcome.

[Phantom Heart]

Please review! It's important to me to have feedback.