Substance of Stars

Extraordinary love.

Expect an extraordinary evening gown

That shimmers a thousand glitters of gold

Underneath the luminous calm of the moon

Walk together along the river

Reverberate simple words of love

This moment is the most beautiful song

The touch connects

The inevitability of life together

But first, the blossoming must

Be satisfied with inherent lust

Author's Note

Thank you for reading, I hope you love it!

Reviews

[Buddhistboy73]

The luminous calm of the moon...this is a deeply emotional and sensuous poem ...:)
This moment is the most beautiful song.....
I love the way you mix mother nature and the senses....like a dance between the two....

And then the final line........satisfied with inherent lust....

erotic and exotic ....
BB73

[Phantom Heart]

Thank you for taking the time to read and let me know your thoughts. I appreciate it.

[Thomas W Case]

Beautiful work. I know what you mean. Vivid and sharp.

[Phantom Heart]

Thank you Thomas!