Universe A

I had my friends give me words to use in a poem while we were camping.

There is a passion

In chasing sunsets

The destination

Beautifully tranquil

My happiness

It is in my comfy chair

Enjoying the soft

Melody of 

The evening breeze

The Gravity Between

My love of nature

And my distinguished

Gentleman is a 

Rock shaped heart

I keep hidden

In the pocket

Of my soul

As the last light

Of day folds

Into the starry night

I know we are

Connected by

Golden Threads

Of eternity's whole

Reviews

[Carlos Lorenzo Estrada]

Creativity is such a unique and self defining quality we possess as human beings. Reading your comment about how this poem was created speaks volumes how your gift moves through you. It's nice to know as a reader what inspires one to create their art. You managed to bring their single words to life in a poem. Wonderful work. Thank you for sharing your poem with us. CLE

[Phantom Heart]

Thank you. I appreciate your time in reading and writing a review. I was originally going to highlight the words they gave me, but then I wasn't sure if that would take from the reader's attention to the actual poem itself. I am still unsure, however I do think that it makes the reader curious to what words they did give me.

[Thomas W Case]

Beautiful work. Love the imagery and power.

[Phantom Heart]

Thank you! I appreciate you stopping by and reading.