Do They Exist?

Do they exist?
Down there in the deep.
Do they exist?
Swimming among the fish.

Do they exist?
With their ageless beauty.
Do they exist?
Easy to anger.

Do they exist?
Their tails in every color.
Do they exist?
Playing sweet music.

Somewhere in the swirling waters of the ocean, hiding from those that hunt for truth.
Tell me...do you believe?

Reviews

[IWRITE]

to answer your question- no i do not believe. there is no evidence to support it so why would i?

but this writing- it is a great example of wishful thinking and is simply to the point.

i like that i am able to figure out what it is about without you having said-

thank you for sharing.

[S. Waldo]

Exactly, no evidence which is why I agree with you :) thank you for the review!

[Nick.B]

Seems more like a song...interesting poem, it has that pirate tale attached to it, great job

[S. Waldo]

Thank you my friend, I have a pirate themed poem I will post just for you :)

[Nick.B]

Really? Not bad

[—-]

now while you are speaking of a mermaid's mystery, you are actually poking at a much broader question...do you believe in magic? I very much enjoyed this sirenian poem...keep up the good work :)

[S. Waldo]

thank you for your words :) personally I do not believe in "magic" but I do believe in a higher power. I also know that I do not know of everything that did/does exist. I try to keep an open mind about things of that sort! lol gracias amigo :)

[—-]

ah much better put dear friend :) much better to be with an open mind but not so open that our brain falls out ;)

[S. Waldo]

to have one's brains fall out would be absolutely dreadful! =P

[—-]

ha! but the beauty is simple...one would not know thy brain has fallen out :P

[S. Waldo]

ah yes, that is a perfect description for probably half the population of Hollywood and Beverly Hills =|

[—-]

surely half the world at large darling ;)

[Sami Khalil]

I guess you are referring to mermaids ...A nice write...:)

[S. Waldo]

I am :) thank you

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)

[S. Waldo]

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[Sami Khalil]

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