Too Soon

Young life never known

Your joys we will never share.

We planned to see your plays

To watch you march in band.

Taking you to college, watching you walk across the stage,

To be there saying I do on your wedding day.

I would have been at the hospital

When you had your first babe.

But instead, we say our final farewell on this,

Your 1st birthday.

Reviews

[Samuel Dickens]

This very is very sad, but beautifully written. Assuming it's true, I wish you comfort and healing.

[Nessie_AJ]

This is so beautiful and I love how you leave the reader guessing until the last two lines! Very well done!

[S. Waldo]

thank yo very much =]

[Lucien Maier]

Very good. Great emotion that you bring to the reader in the piece. Great tribute.

[zainul]

This is a splendid work.
Shared your heartfelt grief in such a novel way.