Confused

Confused

A Poem by longlivenate

I can't think
I'm confused... all the time all because off you
You keep me up all night 
Because your in my dreams

© 2015 longlivenate


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Kind of a weird order, the last line doesn't fit that well either, good concept though

Posted 10 Years Ago


longlivenate

10 Years Ago

Thanks...i didn't really know what to do with that last line
I love this poem it's shirt and sweet....well done :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

longlivenate

10 Years Ago

Thanks so much :)
micky

10 Years Ago

ur welcome :)

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Added on June 7, 2015
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Just a teen who loves sports and writing more..