lifer

If I stay,
or if I go,
Thou shall not know,
For I am a body of contamination, leaving with out an exclamation
I breathe in life,
But exhale by knife

Reviews

[Lizardo]

Wow deep words, I like the last two lines
We want to breathe life, but the only thing we get is madness
we exhale bey knife, kind of makes me think that because we're forced too.
anywas, this is a pretty good poem! I do like this a lot
Keep on writing!