Sometimes in love

My first love poem

Sometimes the path is rough but when I trip you pick me up

Sometimes the rivers wide but that’s ok if you’re on the other side

Sometimes I’m full of fear but that’s ok if you are here,

Oh I do love you so there’s nowhere I wouldn’t go

Mountain tops and deep ravines

Racked rocks and wicked streams

Oh I do love you so I will never let you go

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

8th place

Nov 26, 2014

• National Love Poems Day!

 

forget it

Dec 31, 2014

• Poems that speak from your heart

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

originally a song

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

"Mountain tops and deep ravines

Racked rocks and wicked streams

Oh I do love you so I will never let you go"

A beautiful love song. Please pen more...:)...............

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful use of words. I could feel the emotion and the contentment of being in love. I like the flow of thoughts leading to the very good ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry
Coyote

[Valkyrie Warrior]

Thank you sooooo much for your kind words