Fallen angels

dark angels, acrostic

Dark Angels

 

D: Death, beautiful and unavoidable, so much like you

A: Afterlife is where you dwell, waiting in the depths of hell

R: Rebel sprit, dark and strong

K: Knowing death is coming for us all

 

A: Always ready, never sleeping, waiting to guide the dead

N: Not judging your sins, simply carrying out our sentences

G: Godly they are not, cast from heaven

E: Ever watchful for wrongdoers passing justice in the mortal world

L: Living in death, and thriving

S: Sexy, oh yes so sexy

    

 

 

 

 

Dark

May 8, 2015

 

• Dark Acrostic
• Fallen angels

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Angels of death

Reviews

[Echoes of Eros]

In your words you find such a powerful vision in the darkness that pulls us down, and the sensual, vibrant world found in the shadows. So fierce and wild!! xo

[Valkyrie Warrior]

Thank you darling!!!

[SleeplessVolcano]

very powerful images of these horrid creatures......:). i think you could drop the letters in front, since you did indicate that it is an acrostic :)

[Valkyrie Warrior]

Thank you. I just didn't like it with the no letters in front.

[Coyote Poetry]

Nice use of the two words. Darkness is part of the all of us. Nice flow of thoughts leading to the good closing. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Valkyrie Warrior]

Thank you~!!!!!!!!!!

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[alf]

Hi Beautifullybroken. your thoughts have translated well onto the page. I read maybe a hint of guilt beneath the words, as if you know what these angels are doing to your conscience. Line E . . . justice in thee (the) mortal world. Typo?? just one thing, and acrostic usually starts with the first words as written downwards, in this case, Dark Angels. A good read overall, alf

[Valkyrie Warrior]

Thank you very much!!!

[Marie]

This is intriguing. There's certainly a division between angels of darkness and angels of light.

In the line "G:", I believe you mean "cast" and not "caste", wich is an entirely different meaning.

[Valkyrie Warrior]

Yes there certainly is! Thank you for the review!!