Abuse

Why do I do this to him.....

Baby I love you, remember that

Easy does it, don’t lose your temper                            

 

 

God it hurts, baby please stop

Everyone asks where the bruises come from

No, no please

Too much, too much pain

Let go I can’t breathe

Everything broken

Author's Note

I felt like some more acrostics needed to be written

Reviews

[Minecrafter2098]

That was great! The simplicity of the acrostic was great! I would've been better with maybe a few more acrostics, but it was really good!

[Valkyrie Warrior]

"better with a few more acrostics" ????? Not sure what you mean by this but ok, thanks for the review.

[Nyu]

What a fun exercise that you gave a dark little twist, its compelling for the reader and I think the ending is the most beautiful part.

[Valkyrie Warrior]

Oh thanks!!!!

[Crystal Overmeyer-Birmi..]

Gripping and great story telling. I feel like it didn't need to be a acrostic to get the point across, but its a great piece.

[Valkyrie Warrior]

Thank you!!!

[Dion [MFMDM]]

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[Valkyrie Warrior]

Is that good or bad?

[Dion [MFMDM]]

Sorry for not giving an exact critique. Yes it was good, it just made me feel a certain way for the time being. Yes, another great poem.

[Valkyrie Warrior]

Well then thank you very much!!

[Dion [MFMDM]]

No problem

[closed]

good idea highlighting the first letter of each line
it really helps the reader focus on the poem

also, its more like dialogue than some poems
which i was impressed by

really poignant


-Dream

[Valkyrie Warrior]

Thank you very much Dream!!

[closed]

youre welcome
glad to review

[Valkyrie Warrior]

:-)............

[Saddam]

Being a gentle is great and close to the God.
Very brilliantly done the job dear.
Acrostic is work of fun and some creative formation, it is one of them.

[Valkyrie Warrior]

Thank you very much Saddam