Don't look back

a dark poem

Don't look back

Don't turn around

Blood splattered across the ground

Don't look back

Don't turn around

Remember daddy said don't make a sound

Answered the questions

Tell none that you lied

Conceal the bodies you have to hide

Don't look back

But run away quick

What you did will make you sick

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Just a dark poem

Reviews

[Dani The Unreviewed]

It seems like it was written for a murderer. I mean, the ending lines "But run away quick,
What you did will make you sick" that makes it really dark, and leaves a lingering feeling, that urges me to find out more. Great job. 100 points.

[Valkyrie Warrior]

Thanks Danny!!!!

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Any time :)

[jeannemarie coulter]

dark indeed but very well penned

[Valkyrie Warrior]

Flattered, thank you!

[closed]

very suspenseful
always a good element of prose or poetry

it seems like it could develop into something more even



-Dream

[Valkyrie Warrior]

Thank you!!

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very sick and funny. Rhymes go well together and make sense. I realy love it.

[Valkyrie Warrior]

Wow thanks a lot!