Ticking tocking

Madness

Tick tock watch the clock

Smile as you life fades

Tick tock crazy dreams

Or am I awake?

Today they say I killed someone

Tick tock watch the clock

Mark the years with lines on my cell

Tick tock watching the clock

Smiling as my life fades away

Author's Note

I guess I am mad then...HAHAHAHA

Reviews

[E G TEN]

Your not Mad, your ~supermad~ !!
Cool poem thanks!

[Valkyrie Warrior]

hahahahahahahahahaha you see through my disguise good sir!

[Iris]

You unveiled the general idea behind madness. The total opposite of what a sane person would think. Amazing work.
"Smile as your life fades", I think you mean, not:
"Smile as you life fades"

[Valkyrie Warrior]

Ooops yes thank you!

[Elodie Thompson]

Your interpretation of time is very commendable. The story that you managed to tell through the poem, with each following stanza containing the essence of time is also very interesting. I liked the dark approach in the poem and it was very fascinating to read. Well done.

[Valkyrie Warrior]

Thank you kindly!

[Elodie Thompson]

It was my pleasure.