The Harmony

In a marvelous place

In lines they danced, Together

Instruments in the room conversed

The beautiful energy in symphony

All together as one not a single left out

On this cherry moon was the meeting of minds

Of all shapes and sizes

Of all colors and kinds 

The day we all discovered a deeper understanding of our being

The day we danced together in harmony

Reviews

[Sharon]

Nice. This is a great piece. There is a lot of thought to it. Nice word choice and emotion expressed. I also liked how you used a different font it to make it look more noticeable. Very eye-catching to the reader. I lie to refer to the lines,
"In lines they danced, Together
Instruments in the room conversed
The beautiful energy in symphony
All together as one not a single left out
On this cherry moon was the meeting of minds"
Great thought and a wonderful way to start your poem off. Keeps the reader entertained. Good job, keep writing! ^.^

[R.L. Davenport]

Thank you Sharihe! I appreciate your review and will definitely keep writing ^_^

[Sharon]

Your welcome. I'll be watching for new works!

[Coyote Poetry]

The line dance. Movement to sound and together. A beautiful dance.
"The day we all discovered a deeper understanding of our being
The day we danced together in harmony"
Harmony is always a good place. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Kyle J. Lawson]

The harmony of minds creates a larger mind which then harmonizes with other groups of connected minds. That's exactly what played through my own mind while reading this.

[R.L. Davenport]

Thanks Kyle for the review!

[Kyle J. Lawson]

Welcome!

[Another Poet]

Woaaah! This is my favorite poem from Writers Cafe :-)

[R.L. Davenport]

Thank you tons for your review. It means a lot!

[Another Poet]

No problem:)

[Madi]

This is amazing writing. ;)

[R.L. Davenport]

Thank you Madi!