In Darkness

Hurt

Suffering, it's hovering like black clouds they got me now

My emotions, they flow away like souls and lost causes

Lost in the darkness, my energy's sadistic and caustic

Faith was never present with the armless, left hopeless and toxic

Reviews

[Bhumika Devkota]

The words are very well used to create an very good poem. Thanks for sharing.

[R.L. Davenport]

Thanks Bhumika. I appreciate it.

[Sami Khalil]

Very powerful descriptions of this state where we are left as you say. You have insights of the human condition...Excellent...:)................

[R.L. Davenport]

Thanks Sami. Always wonderful reading your reviews.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome. ......:).......

[Coyote Poetry]

Very nice use of words.
"Faith was never present with the armless, left hopeless and toxic"
Hopeless and toxic. A bad place to land. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[R.L. Davenport]

Thanks Coyote. I always appreciate your opinion.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.