Just a thought

This probally more like a blog thing than anything but whatever

I've lost the will

   the desire

   the need

 

I feel like I shouldn't write another lette

 

I feel like I should sto

 

But maybe this is a good thing.

Now there's no need to believe that I could actually make money doing this

That anything that write matters more then what is drawn in the sand and the tide is coming in

 

Now I can move ahead and...

Reviews

[Rachel Eisenberg]

I'm guessing the missing 'r' and 'p' are to make a point. Regardless of whether it is or isn't... it seems right.

Writing comes and go, I guess. Like something drawn in the sand; like the tide. Creativity ebbs and it flows, and there's a lot to it. More than people think. Sometimes it's POW, sometimes its meh... Meh. And when it's gone there's a fear that maybe it'll never come back.

Making sense?

Not so much.

...

(Second to the last line has some sort of verb-noun malfunction. It's kind of confusing to read.)

I like that this jumps. It really does read more like a blog/thought pattern. I don't think coherently or completely. I'd like to hope I'm not alone...

((don't give up))

[redd Brick Keshner]

Fresh and interesting. Good to read and hope to read more.

[Rhonda]

I like this last line "That anything that write matters more then what is drawn in the sand and the tide is coming in"

Your missing an r on "letter" and a "p" on stop.

Don't stop writing! Never.

-R