Dark dawn

Is in the dawn that my dark thoughts took me completly...

 The dawn is coming ... 
As always...hand in hand with loneliness ... 
This is the time when my heart bleeds more ... 
This is the time that rolls a tear in my face ... 

The dawn is coming ... 
She come dancing with my eternal torment ... 
Come to stranglehold me inside ... 
Come to make fun of my distressing feelings ... 

The dawn is coming ... 
I wish she didn't come ... 
Therefore i no longer stand this hell ... 
Therefore i no longer stand the loneliness ... 

The dawn is coming ... 
No ...she already come... she hugs me strong ... ... 
Stealing my all strength ... 
Stealing my will to live ...

Reviews

[Magdelena]

Deep, dark, and wonderfuly portrayed in the mind of what is dreaded but has already been taken..

I really liked this. It made you stop and take notice, your words grabbing at you.. Good job!

Mag xx

[~LeeAnn~]

Great write...

[Ich bin das Giftmä..]

A riveting poem that combines the dark and light of life. Excellent job