suicide

Head flopped, pills dropped

Knife down, safe and sound

Last words, broken goodbyes

Scrawny paper, messy lies

Tear stains, scar marks

Blood drained, emotionally framed

Forgotten words, unheard goodbyes

Ripped up paper, truthful lies

Mother screams, father cries

Friends weep, sisters try

Sharp blade, blunt pills

Stern rope, wooden box

Deep grave, petaled mud

Soundless words, Engrave with love

Broken heart, stone cold mind

leaving a world, that's never been kind

Author's Note

This i wrote a while back after a suicide attempt I had, so..
I decided to post it
Sorry for any error's, and please feel free to inform me of them

Reviews

[Mari K]

The words are so descriptive. Its a little hard on rhythm because of the drop and add of the rhyme scheme, but the pain is portrayed well so it doesn't matter as much. At any rate, i don't know you, but I'm glad you are still here. You have a talent/outlet that some would trade everything for. Good write.

[micky]

I love this piece i can feel the pain seeping through your words like blood from my wrists....beautiful
Well done