Magnetic Poem

Poem from a creative writing class

Do stars linger
In the night sky?
Reflecting off the woman's porcelain skin
Just like an angel

Tell me
do you miss her when you see the stars?
Gleaming like a light on a mirror
Shining on the ground

Gone in the breeze
She disappeared
Into the sky
Becoming a star of her own

Tell me now
Do you feel guilty
Looking at the constellations in the sky?
Or when the night sky is empty?

Do you miss her?
When the wind whispers in your ear
Reminding you of the woman you claimed to love
The one you lost because of your selfish ways

Please do tell
Do you think of her?
When you see the beauty in the stars
Do you see her beauty too?

Author's Note

I don't really like this one. It doesn't rhyme, like at all. You can interpet what the man did yourself, but I was thinking more of the man cheated, woman found out, left him out of anger, and got killed whether in an accident or something else.

Reviews

[Marie Kinnett]

This is really good. As for the rhyming, it doesn't have to. It should be the way you want it to be, not sticking to the rules applied. The way you write is how you express things and it isn't always perfect. Bc not every poem is perfect as every person is not perfect
Love Marie

[Elli🦝]

Thank you, and you are right!