he loves me

so he tells me

he loves me ....

but how can i

be sure?

 

i know i have seen

him catching glances

of me through

those bloodshot eyes.

 

maybe he is telling

me the truth....

but how do i 

know? i don't

understand.

 

i think he really

does mean it.

know that i have

seen him with a dozen

roses and a wedding ring

at my front dooor.

Author's Note

ingnor grammer and spelling plz

Reviews

[Anna]

Remember that it's important to have great spelling and grammar. Otherwise, it will distract from the message you want to deliver to your audience.

"Bloodshot" that was a great word to use. Very descriptive. Use more of this type of word and less fluff.

Also, play with rhythm [with the syllabus of each line of the stanzas].

good luck!

[Closed Account]

OMG! I love this, arabella! It's....It's....it's amazing!! Keep up the great work!