Love's Dance

About how love begins and ends...like the beginning and the end of a song....

You take my hand,
I take the chance.
I feel the beat,
we start to dance.

Lost in your eyes,
Wanting, wishing.
Moving together.
This, is living.

I whisper some words,
into your ear.
It feels so good,
to have you near.

Melding with you,
becoming one.
Only us,
till the dance is done.

The music ends,
you glance around.
Your passion fades,
my heart hits the ground.

The moment gone,
the fire out,
you changed my world,
without a doubt.

But too quickly I loved,
then you slipped away.
Leaving the echoes,
of happier days.

Reviews

[Flutterby]

This was a great write, and reminds me of not only of how so much like love is... but also how it feels when you are slowdancing with your significant other.

[Seriana]

Ah, good write! Love and pain, I felt them both, and you did a superb job of rhyming. Lovely write.

[L.G. Knight]

another beautiful write! the waltz of love all to often ends much too soon...