Deadmen

drak

Deadmen marching, skeleto drummer

a war being fought

mind filled with

thought knowing

from the start

Dead soldiers have no heart

The end is clear

Death is near

Look in the night

there is no light

for now you will die

no chance to cry

Just say goodbye

Reviews

[darkgurl]

This is wonderful, I really like this....Kim

[Wildecat]

Short sweet and you definitely got the point across. Nice write kittykat.

[ATG]

That was a good poem. It had a nice rhythm and flow.
It was short and got the point across nicely.
Good job.

[Alaina]

wow i really like this!, Its short but sweet, and you certainly conveyed the thought nicely, it has a good flow too.
excellent poem, would love to see more of you work, keep up the excellent work!
- Thanx for sharing! :)