Nature

I wrote this poetry for my school magazine...

The flowers are blooming

The children are laughing

The sun is smiling at us

The rivers are flowing

The mountains are calling

The birds are soaring high up in the sky

The trees are whispering

The moon is shining

The clouds are rumbling in the sky

The sea is rolling

The fruits are riping

The fishes are swimming in the water

How wonderful the nature is

It gives you company when you are lonely

So, isn't the nature friendly????

Author's Note

i compared nature with other things...please tell if the poem can be made better...and please say wat do u think about it??...

Reviews

[Laura E. Aranda]

Fishes
you mean Fish

This is cute. Cheers, lea

[clau]

I love the concept and the color! except I don't like the The
No offense! =] But I think it would be better if you didn't use it and only used

Fowers are blooming
Children are laughing
Sun is smiling at us
Rivers are flowing