Our Firsts

Everything from,
Our first date,
To,
Our first kiss,
To,
Our first dance,
To,
Our first love,
To,
Our first apartment,
To,
Our first baby,
To
Our first house.

All of these are our firsts.
These are the moments we think of,
But what we never think about,
What we dread to bring up,
What we avoid with everything we have,
Are our lasts,
And as you know,
We have a lot of those.

Author's Note

I haven't done like half of these things, I just put it into a poem.

Reviews

[Jane Doe]

Ahaha. CUTEEE I MISS YOU GIRLY!!!!!!:(
But I like the poem
I have done 4/7 not bad:)

Xoxoxoxooxoxoxoxo
~abbie
100/100

[HereWithoutYou<3]

Aww, it's really cute.

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

unique and truly affecting composition~ like snapshots of memories bright and beautiful~ while those snapshots of lasts are turned face down~
much enjoyed!~

[OceanTropic]

I really liked this. I really enjoyed the contrast between the beginning and the end, the whole first and lasts thing. I love how you just flipped it around, not because its opposite, but because you give us this optimism about our firsts, and we sort of expand our fantasy of a life with someone,

and then the bittersweet reminder that with every first comes a last. I enjoyed this. Keep writing!

[Adelia Alighieri]

Very nice, everything's perfectly in place. Well done.

[.]

ahh that's beautifully put...poignant and full of truths