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My worlds so dark

like the smoke from a factory

polluting my mind

with negative thoughts

sifting deeper and deeper

inside my head

Saying there is nothng really to see

Just a bunch of humans

Who just can't be

Always looking

for what they can't have

Always wishing away the clouds

But not I

I welcome the clouds

the smoke

the darkness

For I know it will always be

Reviews

[Vicky Zhuang Yi-Yin]

i really like this, i can relate to this, it's something i feel that i'm going through these days. but i guess this is what life is.
Great job!
-Yin

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. profound ... and excruciating ... but this lesson in sheer courage, resilience and clarity of thought i shall never forget ... and while i am slowly learning to accept darkness ... not anywhere close to being as spiritual as you ... it is the warmth of words such as these ... and the knowledge that this darkness is shared by many ... that keeps me going ... deeply soulful poetry ...