Broken

Her eyes are lowered

cautious stepping with soft voice

a broken woman

Reviews

[Robin]

a sad but perfectly expressed image

[EqualRhyme]

beautiful. i tend to not like haikus but i love yours.
keep it up
-Tanner

[Desert Dreamer]

I can see her clearly...I hope she is able to heal.

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

such a fragile and whispering delicate movement that delivers itself in the power of its gentle fragility~

[Crowley]

Reminds me of the wife of the Marine on American Beauty...pretty sad when it gets to that. Great write, loved it.

[Jeff Loquist]

this is so telling. I think we have all known a woman with traits like this...you long to do something but you can't...powerful